英語(yǔ)作文600字

　　在平平淡淡的日常中，大家都不可避免地會(huì)接觸到作文吧，借助作文人們可以實(shí)現(xiàn)文化交流的目的。寫(xiě)起作文來(lái)就毫無(wú)頭緒？以下是小編收集整理的英語(yǔ)作文600字8篇，僅供參考，歡迎大家閱讀。

英語(yǔ)作文600字 篇1

　　When I was very small, I like to read the books with pictures, because I did not know the words. One day, I saw the interesting pictures in the book, I saw the turtle and the rabbit, but I did not know what it said, so I asked my mom.

　　She told me that the turtle and the rabbit were racing, I said there was no doubt that the rabbit would win, but my mom smiled and said the turtle won at last because the rabbit was so confident and slept for a while and missed the time.

　　I was shocked, I learned that lagging behind doesn’t mean lose, if we insist, we will have the chance to win.

　　在我還很小的時(shí)候，我喜歡看那些有圖片的書(shū)，因?yàn)槲疫�不認(rèn)識(shí)字。有一天，我在一本書(shū)上看到了有趣的圖片，我看到了烏龜和兔子，但是我不知道上面講的.是什么，因此我問(wèn)媽媽。她告訴我烏龜和兔子正在比賽，我說(shuō)肯定是兔子贏，但是媽媽笑笑，說(shuō)烏龜最后贏了，因?yàn)橥米幽敲醋孕�，睡了一�?huì)，錯(cuò)過(guò)了時(shí)間。我很震驚，我學(xué)到了落后并不意味著輸，如果我們堅(jiān)持，就有機(jī)會(huì)取得勝利。

英語(yǔ)作文600字 篇2

　　In the spring,we can flying kite.spring a very beautiful.I Believe everyone love spring.

　　In the spring ,i heve a picnic in the park .we look some ducks in the pond,they are lovely,sky not have a clouds. so todayout of the question rain soon.

　　I heard the weather forecast ‘’it will be sunny in shandong'.we are in the park the sun is shining and the wind is blowing ,linda and i are playing hinde and seek.the birds are singing.the rabbits are jimping.the weather is very good.a man is wearing a big hat.some clildren are jumping in the water. we are having a lovely time！Bye-bye.

　　修改后：

　　Sring is very beautiful. I believe everyone loves spring. In spring, we can fly kites. In spring, we can have a picnic in the park. There, we can see some lovely ducks playing in the pond.The sun is shining brightly, the wind is blowing gently and the birds are singing happily. Linda and I are playing hide and seek. The weather is very good. We are having a great time.

英語(yǔ)作文600字 篇3

　　My Life

　　I think my life is very regular, please listen to my life habit! First of all, every day I get up at o 'clock in the morning, and then wear clothes, wash a face, comb my hair, it may take me ten minutes of time. Then I eat breakfast, I don't when you eat leftovers, and is usually eat bread and milk in the morning, sometimes with some sausage. So he went to school. Home at noon, I will drink a glass of water first, supplement the moisture of the body. Lunch is usually eat rice, add some vegetables and meat. Then go to school again. Go home at night, the first thing is to drink water. Because I think water is the source of life, we have to drink plenty of water every day. Dinner usually eat noodles and vegetables and some meat. After about eight o 'clock, I will go out for a walk. This is my life habit, my friends, do you?

英語(yǔ)作文600字 篇4

　　立意不鮮明

　　經(jīng)常看見(jiàn)孩子邊寫(xiě)邊數(shù)“一、二、三……”湊字?jǐn)?shù)現(xiàn)象普遍，或者經(jīng)常問(wèn)老師：“寫(xiě)不出來(lái)，我能瞎編嗎？”有些孩子極度缺乏生活常識(shí)或生活經(jīng)歷、也沒(méi)經(jīng)典閱讀文學(xué)的滋養(yǎng)，造成“下筆無(wú)言”，或者寫(xiě)的東西單純?yōu)榱烁愎�、好玩，沒(méi)有實(shí)質(zhì)性內(nèi)容。

　　建議家長(zhǎng)增加孩子的`生活閱歷和原版閱讀，從而先做到“有語(yǔ)意、有觀點(diǎn)、有情緒”。

　　結(jié)構(gòu)不完整

　　小學(xué)生作文容易結(jié)構(gòu)缺失，常見(jiàn)寫(xiě)著寫(xiě)著，突然結(jié)束沒(méi)有結(jié)尾；或者沒(méi)有開(kāi)頭，讓讀者莫名其妙…… 小學(xué)生作文通常邏輯混亂，思維跳躍，東一句、西一句，內(nèi)容不關(guān)聯(lián)。

　　建議先訓(xùn)練“框架式寫(xiě)作”，利用一些連接詞理清思路，如：First of all, For a start, In addition… 進(jìn)而做出取舍，突出閃光點(diǎn)。對(duì)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行取舍非常很有必要性的，避免文章冗長(zhǎng)、論據(jù)雷同、突出文章的重點(diǎn)。建議訓(xùn)練孩子加強(qiáng)整篇概念：Introduction, Body, Conclusion, 即中文所說(shuō)的“總~分~總”，確保文章的完整性。

　　中式思維

　　小學(xué)生作文表達(dá)中式思維過(guò)重：學(xué)生中文思維能力遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出其英文表達(dá)能力，所以出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)句、斷句等現(xiàn)象。不少孩子寫(xiě)作文竟然變成了“中文翻英文”的過(guò)程，腦子里面構(gòu)思的是中文作文，千方百計(jì)把它翻譯成英文而已。

　　建議要培養(yǎng)孩子長(zhǎng)期原版閱讀習(xí)慣，積累詞匯和形成英文思維，從而縮短當(dāng)中轉(zhuǎn)換環(huán)節(jié)。

　　基本功不過(guò)關(guān)

　　小學(xué)生作文單詞拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤眾多：三單錯(cuò)誤，時(shí)態(tài)混亂等等，建議避開(kāi)雷區(qū)，扎實(shí)學(xué)好基本語(yǔ)法和句式，并養(yǎng)成檢查習(xí)慣，進(jìn)而做到下筆無(wú)錯(cuò)。

　　句式單一

　　小學(xué)生作文句式太單一：通篇一種到兩種句式，即使沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤，也很難歸類到一等作文行列。

　　如果孩子年齡小，就只會(huì)那兩種，如簡(jiǎn)單靜態(tài)句或進(jìn)行時(shí)，也建議控制好比例，適時(shí)轉(zhuǎn)換。

英語(yǔ)作文600字 篇5

Sunset In order to see the sunset ， I got everything ready before 5in the afternoon . Then I went to the East Hill . At that time ， the sun was already in the west but it was still shining . Its light was so bright that I couldn't even open my eyes . When I arrived at the East Hill ， the light became a bit yellow . After a short while ， it was completely golden ， then red . The sun nearly set . It was like a big

　　red ball . The cloud around it was also painted red . Little by little the cloud coveredmore and more of the sun . At last it disappeared behind the cloud . It was dark and I hurried back . 日落 為了看日落,我把一切都準(zhǔn)備好了在下午 5 點(diǎn)前。然后我去了東山。 那時(shí),太陽(yáng)已經(jīng)在西方了但是它仍然在照耀著。它的光是如此強(qiáng)烈,以至于我甚至無(wú) 法睜開(kāi)眼睛。當(dāng)我來(lái)到東山的時(shí)候,陽(yáng)光已經(jīng)變得有點(diǎn)黃。一會(huì)兒以后,它完全變成了金 黃,然后變成紅色。太陽(yáng)近設(shè)置。這就像一個(gè)大大的紅色的火球。它周?chē)��?云也被涂成 了紅色。漸漸地,云彩遮蓋越來(lái)越多的太陽(yáng)。最后它消失在云。這是黑了,我快步跑回了 家

英語(yǔ)作文600字 篇6

　　You have bought a brand-new computer in a store。 But much to your disappointment， it could not be properly operated when you got it back。 Write a letter to the manager:

　　1) giving complaints，

　　2) describing the problems，

　　3) and asking for some compensations。

　　Dear manager，

　　I write this letter to you to make some complaints about the computer I bought in your store yesterday afternoon。 There＇ s something wrong with it。 That makes me extremely unhappy。

　　The computer cannot be properly shut down when I got it back to the office。 When I click the shutdown button， it seems that the machine gives no response。 And I＇m so annoyed with it。

　　It＇s obvious that you didn＇ t carefully examine the machine before you sold it。 I think your store should take full responsibility for selling me the defective machine。 I insist that you give me a satisfactory reply。 I do want you to give back my money as soon as possible。

　　Sincerely yours，

　　Tom

英語(yǔ)作文600字 篇7

　　Every time I write a diary, I don’t know what to write. To me, every day is the same. I just do the routine study. Get up early in the morning,eat my breakfast, go to school, go home after class, eat my dinner, and go to sleep after I finish my homework. Then the next day I will do the same.But now I learn to look at things from another angle. I start to observe what happens around me every day; even it is a little incident. When I help a little girl cross the street, or I see something interesting, I will keep it in mind and Write it down. If I use my eyes and head more, I will know what to write in a diary.

　　我每次寫(xiě)日記的時(shí)候都不知道寫(xiě)什么。以前對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，每天都是老樣子，我做著同一件事就是學(xué)習(xí)。早上早起，吃早飯，去學(xué)校，回家吃晚飯，做完作業(yè)后睡覺(jué)，第二天又重復(fù)進(jìn)行。可現(xiàn)在我學(xué)會(huì)從另一角度看問(wèn)題。我開(kāi)始每天仔細(xì)觀察生活優(yōu)秀作文 專注寫(xiě)作 ，觀察我周?chē)�發(fā)生的'事，哪怕是微不足道的小事。每當(dāng)我?guī)托∶妹眠^(guò)馬路，或我看到什么有趣的東西，我都會(huì)記在我的腦子里并寫(xiě)下來(lái)。如果我多動(dòng)眼睛和腦子，那么我就會(huì)知道日記該記什么了。

英語(yǔ)作文600字 篇8

　　目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)以“ pinin n cheating in exainatin ”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文 。

　　主要原因

　　假設(shè)Thas Edisn是你最喜歡的人，請(qǐng)根據(jù)信息寫(xiě)篇短文 1. 對(duì)該人物的.簡(jiǎn)單介紹 2. 喜歡該人物的理由 3. 從該人物身上得到的啟示

　　范文： Thas Edisn

　　Brn in Aerica , Thas Edisn was a great scientist and inventr . He was nce thught t be a b wh was nt wrth educating . In fact , he was a an full f iaginatin.

　　I adire Edisn a lt because f his great cntributin t the wrld . He had re than 1000 inventins . In his life tie, he was alwas eager t nw hw things wred, which helped hi t wn the nicnae “ the wizard f Mel par” . He was als s diligent that he wred da and night . And this explained wh he had s an great inventins .

　　What ipresses e st is his faus saing : “ Genius is ne percent inspiratin and ninet-nine percent perspiratin “. Prbabl I can’t be an Edisn self , but I can be a hardwring teaer .Fr hi, I realize the secret t success is nt when and where u were brn ,but what u are ding and hw u d it in ur life.

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